From what I received in feedback last week, my pitch could definitely use some work. What I needed to improve was the camera placement and hook, so this time I just jumped right into it. I also needed to practice it a couple times, and I believe this time there were less stutters. I still need to work on the delivery that is something that will probably take me a while to get.
Friday, July 13, 2018
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Elevator Pitch:
Elevator Pitch Reflection and Changes:
From what I received in feedback last week, my pitch could definitely use some work. What I needed to improve was the camera placement and hook, so this time I just jumped right into it. I also needed to practice it a couple times, and I believe this time there were less stutters. I still need to work on the delivery that is something that will probably take me a while to get.
From what I received in feedback last week, my pitch could definitely use some work. What I needed to improve was the camera placement and hook, so this time I just jumped right into it. I also needed to practice it a couple times, and I believe this time there were less stutters. I still need to work on the delivery that is something that will probably take me a while to get.
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Hey Mary! Good job with your elevator pitch! I like how you dressed professionally and improved the camera placement. Something that both you and I need to improve would be to memorize the pitch. This would minimize the number of times we stutter and we would be much more confident in delivering the pitch. As you practice more, you will get better in delivering and will become more comfortable in front of the camera.
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ReplyDeleteLove the professional attire, I could learn a thing or two from you. When speaking you want to exude confidence in your idea and while you articulated your points well I didn’t feel the confidence or enthusiasm of someone ready to change the world. This isn’t required of course but it make a world of difference when pitching. If you kept up the recordings you would become much more comfortable and thus much more convincing.
Mary! I think this elevator pitch was such an improvement from the last. You definitely seemed more rehearsed and knew exactly what you wanted to say this time. You were clear and to the point and your pitch was easy to follow. You are standing and dressed professionally too, so overall I think this is a solid pitch. I am no expert on elevator pitches because I just learned how to do one too, but the more you practice it the better you will get.
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